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Submitted: December 6, 2011
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Shutter Speed:1/90 second
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Focal Length:70 mm
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Date Taken:Nov 4, 2010, 12:09:43 PM
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Critique by *BWozniakPhotography Dec 7, 2011, 11:23:58 AM

Hmmm.. This picture certainly has a lot of potential. As far as I can see that it is quite simple, I can also see that it's very effective. The model's face, hair and expression is lovely and especially in black and white it looks fantastic. The framing is good, however in my opinion it's too tight on the top, and a little bit more room would have been nice abover her head, so that the crop wasn't so tight on the hair. As well as that I am having mixed feelings about the light coming in from the bottom left. From one point of view it's original, but on the other hand, it's distracting and causes a major loss in contrast in the image. I think that maybe in this case less would have been more, and this flare should have been avoided.

Overall though - a very nice picture indeed! Nice model and good work!

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~LapikaArt Dec 16, 2011

beautiful pic!
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!ArtandEmotion Dec 6, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

I Like the rays of light at the bottom, the low contrast at the bottom and high contrast in the top of the image give this a unique feel... I Love the expression, as with all of your work this feels emotional... Beautiful Portrait!

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